tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6956736415353708608.post7958075318527059716..comments2024-02-15T07:16:26.396-08:00Comments on John Francis: John Francis - Chapter 137Sunstreakedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07144150267670415273noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6956736415353708608.post-10088701559620771032012-05-13T13:12:21.403-07:002012-05-13T13:12:21.403-07:00This chapter showed the depth of the love these tw...This chapter showed the depth of the love these two have for each other. The lightest touch can cause a spark between them. I loved the last part " He twitched inside her and knew this night was far from over." Damn!!jovikitn65https://www.blogger.com/profile/12175102491873423944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6956736415353708608.post-1216306435545689062008-07-13T18:43:00.000-07:002008-07-13T18:43:00.000-07:00I am so impressed with all of the details in your ...I am so impressed with all of the details in your story. It's one of the areas that I'm afraid I'm going to really struggle with in my own! The restaurant scene was absolutely decadent. You couldn't have described it better if you'd actually eaten there yourself.<BR/>And that sex/love scene....perfect.Daydreamer-https://www.blogger.com/profile/01537071219550105161noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6956736415353708608.post-63259603613380284112008-07-13T09:20:00.000-07:002008-07-13T09:20:00.000-07:00Wow! Thanks guys! I actually love this chapter t...Wow! Thanks guys! I actually love this chapter too because it was about making love with the person you love. As for research, I go on the web, find places in the city I'm talking about, find their web sites and get the info, then re-write it a little differently to work it into the story. Papageno's, the owner, the inside of it, the menu, etc., are all from their web site, so I used it. <BR/><BR/>Can't say enough thank you's for the comments. I'm actually working harder than I thought to write a story with intimacy, rather than simply shagging (lol) all over the place! I have another story that does that and when I figure out how to post it and link it here, I will. <BR/><BR/>P.S. Oh Goddess Hathor! I need your help again!Sunstreakedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07144150267670415273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6956736415353708608.post-83448339519581758622008-07-13T03:59:00.000-07:002008-07-13T03:59:00.000-07:00You're writing is so real! I loved these last chap...You're writing is so real! I loved these last chapters! I'm curious how you do your research...the dinner chapter was just great and the details very elaborated!<BR/>ArwenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6956736415353708608.post-77504948557601698282008-07-12T18:39:00.000-07:002008-07-12T18:39:00.000-07:00Ahhh... I agree - really hot chapter, yet touchin...Ahhh... I agree - really hot chapter, yet touching and tender. Love them together.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6956736415353708608.post-91429493050877178892008-07-12T15:21:00.000-07:002008-07-12T15:21:00.000-07:00Should have read this before I had that cold showe...Should have read this before I had that cold shower not after! Another great chapter, love how perfectly they fit together.Cathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16703355488799948222noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6956736415353708608.post-19160706673635885772008-07-12T10:12:00.000-07:002008-07-12T10:12:00.000-07:00Thanks for another great chapter!Thanks for another great chapter!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6956736415353708608.post-2463012149881924092008-07-12T04:40:00.000-07:002008-07-12T04:40:00.000-07:00I couldn't agree more with Opester. They are so g...I couldn't agree more with Opester. They are so good together.<BR/><BR/>This was a great chapter, so loving!<BR/><BR/>LindaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6956736415353708608.post-28648783527527191292008-07-12T03:55:00.000-07:002008-07-12T03:55:00.000-07:00Such a hot chapter with such vivid detail-I love t...Such a hot chapter with such vivid detail-I love the tenderness and closeness between them and how they seem to match each other so well-always on the same page in terms of what they are wanting and feeling in the moment, like two halves of one whole!Opesterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01427651272156002103noreply@blogger.com